Showing posts with label Bad copy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Bad copy. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

CNET needs a copy editor

"Intel has been on a quest to push ultrabooks as the latest and greatest technology. Last year the chipmaker created a $300 fund to aid hardware and software companies aiming to enhance the lightweight laptops." 


Good luck with that, Intel.

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Obviously

"A former newsletter reporter is need to write articles for website dealing with regulatory issues." (from Craigslist)

Sunday, May 30, 2010

Good prices, bad copy writers

Subject line of email from Best Buy: "New reducing pricing on a variety of laptops"

It would appear that pricing is on a diet.

Monday, June 15, 2009

Maruchan Instant Lunch Editor's Reflex

CAUTION: HOT! HANDLE WITH CARE ESPECIALLY WHEN SERVING CHILDREN

Thanks for the warning. I'll have my kid medium-well with risotto on the side.