Dear Stupid, Lazy Sonofabitch Author:
In your nearly 700 notes (which you submitted as footnotes rather than endnotes per our submission guidelines), you failed to enclose within quotation marks a single report title.
There must be close to a hundred of them. In addition, you failed to italicize perhaps twenty or so book titles.
Also, you evidently couldn't make up your addled brain regarding the military vs. civilian treatment of how to structure a specific date.
Finally, your clearly schizoid approach to hyphenation and capitalization would seem to indicate an immediate need for treatment.
In closing, I can only say that all of the above, and so much more, perfectly represents the focus of your book: the fight against terrorism. For this editorial effort, I am the good guy and you are the terrorist.
Forever disrespectfully yours,